Writing wk 1

For writing this week I worked on creating my own version of Hansel and Gretel

Hansel, and Gretel were abandoned in a  forest the dark forest to be exact.walking through the dark forest 

They saw trees as  sharp  daggers. It was misty all around the forest. they were lost and scared

starving too they continued on Gretel was scared stiff. she held onto Hansel, gripping his arm.

then out of the forest they saw a gingerbread house. The smell was intoxicating.

They knew they should

Gretel was frightened; she held onto Hansel and whispered i'm scared. Hansel held onto gretel. but

Hansel knew that their mother would never want to see them again.

 

 

have you ever read Hansel and Gretel ?